尽 吾 之 力,以 达 天 际
?得磕?2月结束之际,有一场全国高手集合的盛大武林竞赛,史称“考研”,掰头共持续两日。如今离考研已剩缺乏二十天,武林高手们出尽奇招,进入最终冲刺期间,整天闭关练功,但求最终能不负数月尽力,如愿以偿,闻名武林,进入心仪门派进修武功。
曾有往届高手大放厥词,“英语考到及格就够了!”令鄙人为ta捏一把汗。从早年武林比拼的成果来看,英语可以就是一决输赢之要害,若只差那一招半式,与心仪门派坐失机宜,不免过分怅惘。
今日就由本瓦派子弟向各位教授“英语高文文写作技巧”,愿各高手能充分使用余下时日,尽心修炼。
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根柢招式:高档词(组)替换
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咱们自小习武(哑巴英语),脑袋中多多极少都记住一些根柢表达。但考研高手如云,如何可以出类拔萃?试想你面前有两份卷子,一份通篇只会“but”来“but”去,另一篇能活络运用nevertheless、even if、consequently等高档联接词,你选谁?
当别人只会用because和since来阐明缘由的时分,你反手来一招【高档词(组)替换】,使出owing to、on account of反击,就能打对方一个措手不及,节节溃退,对手看了都说服,教师看了都说好!高档词(组)悄然总结放在这了,拿走不谢。
1 高档联接词
(表次序)in the first place;to begin with;last but not least;for one thing,for another
(表缘由)owing to;result from;due to;on account of;in that;thanks to
(表成果)as a result;according to;consequently;in consequence;hence;under these conditions
(表比照)on the contrary;different from;on one hand,on the other hand;whereas
(表转机)nevertheless;nonetheless
(表让步)despite;even though
(表总结)to sum up;in summary;in short;in conclusion;all in all
(表举例)for example;for instance;take...as example;a case in point
2 常用词(组)高档替换
express - illustrate;convey
regard - consider;view;perceive
think - hold;believe;maintain;argue
know - realize;comprehend;identify;perceive;recognize
get - acquire;attain;achieve;obtain;gain
show - demonstrate;indicate;illustrate;reveal
cause - trigger;result in;give rise to;lead to
improve - enhance;promote;strengthen
develop - cultivate;foster;nurture
influence - impact;effect
advantage - merit;strength
disadvantage - drawback;downside;weakness
ability - capacity;competence
kind - type;category;variety
way - method;approach
situation - circumstance;position
(副词&介词)
firstly - previously;initially;originally;basically;fundamentally
especially - particularly;indeed
very - extremely;overwhelmingly;intensely
hardly - merely;barely
about - approximately;nearly;roughly
actually - as a matter of fact;indeed;literally
(描述词)
important-significant;essential;critical;dominant;be of great significance;significant;most important of all
useful - beneficial;rewarding
famous - renowned;prominent;noticeable;notable
popular - prevailing;prevalent
good - beneficial;advantageous;excellent;valuable
bad - terrible;unacceptable;inadequate;defective;harmful
beautiful - attractive;gorgeous
energetic - dynamic;vigorous;animated
positive - promising
(词组)
from one’s opinion - it seems to one that;form the standpoint of;from the perspective of
try one’s best to do - spare no efforts to;take great pains to;make every effort to;make determined attempts to
be used to - be accustomed to
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进阶招式:短句变长句
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懂得了高档词的替换,下一步就是要把咱们的小学鸡英语句式也换掉。说真话,假定一篇文章只需简略句式,那么咱们无法把观念说得很充分。以2020年英语一作文真题为例,主题是“习气”。别人在表旷达点时,来了一句“after looking the picture, I think having a good habit is very important”。这时你轻视一笑,蓄力发射出【短句变长句】技能,流通地写出:Apparently, the pictures intend to illustrate that forming a good habit, especially a good habit of time management, is of great significance.
对手已被k.o而且投来仰慕的眼光。废话不说了,帮人帮究竟,办法如下:
1 学会把?档谩胺乘觥币坏?/p>
如比方所示,从“having a good habit”到“forming a good habit, especially a good habit of time management”,是把“养成好习气”这个点实施到具体的细节。写得越具体,你的语句才越有内容,根柢不怕写不可。
2 活用句式
“doing sth is adjhttp://www.yidianzixun.com/article/从句”是比照好用的长句型,也比照活络,各位可以直接记在小本本中。而从“After looking the picture”到“Apparently, the pictures intend to illustrate that”的诀窍是:把两句话要说的意思兼并到一个从句中。比方中运用的是宾语从句,这也是比照常用的从句句式,用that引导,也可以省掉。
3 巧用刺进语
比方中“forming a good habit, especially a good habit of time management”其实就是奇妙有利地势用了刺进语,不只把“啥样的好习气”说得愈加具体和具体,而且不需要另起一句介绍,融入到一个语句中,有用增加语句长度。
有些同学说了,这短句变长句乍一看不困难,可是一到下笔的时分,仍是习气性地一句一句地写,活像豌豆射手。
咱们持续拿上文的2020年英语一作文真题为例,当咱们要描绘图中的信息时,豌豆射手们可以会这样写:On the first picture, a young girl is doing her homework. She decided to take a break after finishing her task. On the other picture, a young boy decided to start his task before deadline.
这样写当然没错,但很一般就是了,信赖我们也都看得出来。那么怎么能把三四个短语句写生长语句呢?这儿又有一些武功绝技要共享给我们:
1 把有相关的短句用相关词兼并到一个长句
比方“a young girl is doing her homework. She decided to take a break until sheafter finishingher task.”这个有些,咱们既要描绘女孩子正在做啥,又要描绘她的观念,主体相同,都是图像中的女孩子,那么就可以兼并到一同说,最简略的办法就是在两个语句之间加上联接词“and”。
2 把短句变成语句成分,合写成一个长句
上面的第一种办法没啥技能难度,看起来比照高档的是,把短句变生长句的语句成分,然后能兼并短句。把短句变成语句成分,可以经过变成伴随状况、变成从句、变成同位语等等办法。比方上面描绘女孩的这个语句,就可以经过运用伴随状况和宾语从句,变生长语句:a young girl is doing her homework,saying that she didn't decide to take a break until she finished her task.
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高阶招式:长句方法丰厚
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上面的比方介绍了being最初的句式以及宾语从句,可是整篇作文想要愈加亮眼,有必要告诉教师,你不是只背了模版的几句话,你是能了解掌控多种句型的!当对手思来想去都只会写“I think that……”的时分,你屏息凝思,运用七成功力使出一招【长句方法丰厚】,凹凸立判。
以2020年英语二作文真题为例,主题是“高校学外行机阅览意图”,当咱们想阐明“59.5%学生运用手机学习常识”的缘由时,可以这样写:College students are possible toattain what they are attracted withby their smart phone.(大学生可以经过手机获取他们感快乐喜爱的常识。)
加粗有些是一个宾语从句,跟上文举例是同一个句型。咱们还可以把这句话改换成不一样的句式,以习气不一样的作用。
1 主语从句
That the advancement of modern society’ s technology makes it possible forcollege students to attain new knowledge by their smart phone.(现代科技的打开使得大学生可以经过智能手机获取新常识。)
2 表语从句
That is why college students are possible to attain new knowledgeby their smart phone.(这就是大学生可以经过智能手机获取新常识的缘由。)
3 定语从句
Smart phone that college students useis efficient to attain new knowledge .(智能手机是大学生获取新常识的有用途径。)
4 偏重句
It’s the Internet function of the smart phone thatmakes it possible for college students to learn no matter when and where. (智能手机的上网功用使得大学生能随时随地学习。)
5 倒装句
So convenient is the smart phone thatcollege students are possible to learn no matter when and where. (智能手机如此快捷,大学生能随时随地学习。)
读下来咱们或许会发现,有些句式不太合适用在这句话上,老是有点“违和感”,所以这就需求咱们平常多操练不一样的句式,可以总结出一套归于自个的句式模板,比方抛出自个观念时可以用宾语从句(The pictures / charts intend to illustrate that……)讲缘由时可以用表语从句(That is why……)等,把你的作文变得愈加丰厚起来。当然你也可以选择来个大杂烩,炫技炫到教师头昏目炫:
Due to the advancement of modern society’ technology,college students are possible to attain what they are attracted with by their smart phone.It’s the Internet function of the smart phone that makes it possible for college students to learn no matter when and where.How convenient smart phone is! ()
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终极招式:运用技巧
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1 总结3-4个通用作文模版
作文要有一套自个的模板,小作文、高文文各一套。高文文总结一般性模版,比方看图写作应有描绘图像的模板,由点及面,不会漏掉描绘图像的某个有些。但不该堕入每一个具体论题的模版,假定每一个论题都背一篇范文是永久都背不完的。关于每个论题,咱们大约堆集的是有关的生词、短语和句型,以及范文中比照出彩的观念(是你想不到的,当作材料堆集)。
2 堆集高档句型
除了上述咱们说的不一样的句式以外,还有一些比照固定的高档句型,背了就能直接套用,那何乐而不为?又给我们总结一些,快拿走别被人看见!
It is no exaggerations to say that……
It's generally recognized that……
Believe it or not,……
It is time that we put / urged an immediate end to the undesirable situation / tendency of……
It concerns many people that……
sth. plays a key part in……
sth. lays the groundwork for……
sb. pay a heavy price for ……
Therefore, in order to……,effective means should be taken to……
It is necessary / essential / important that effective / proper actions / steps / measures should be taken to end / correct the situation / tendency / phenomenon.
Awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution.
……is just a desirable idea rather than an achievable reality.
……has/ have considerable influence on
Yet our job is not to wait these things to happen,but to devise a way to obviate them, at the very least, to alleviate them because God help those who help themselves.
Today,……, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First,…… Second, ……What makes things worse is that……
As stated in the previous paragraph……
The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, ……
3 掌控好“度”
假定通篇都用长语句,教师批改的时分可以会像吃了十斤红薯相同噎得慌。所以咱们也要时不时给教师“喝点水”,长短句相间,增强整篇文章的可读性。
结语:
各位高手,时刻严峻,切勿蹉跎,打起精力。
英语作文,有必要注重,稍有差池,无缘上岸。
高档替换,K.O.对手,活用句型,长短相间。
两篇作文,模版打底,论题堆集,掌控抢手。
临考之际,淡定沉稳。江湖之大,顶峰相见。
撰文 - 碰碰子
图像 - 来历于网络
校正 - Lavender
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